cool idea but...
The animation was, as others have mentioned shit, but the story was kind of interesting and i liked the song. Maybe just stick to ideas and get a friend to help with animation. The message is annoying and almost preachy at times, but lets not read to far into it. Are cigarettes and other drugs really going to make a meteor come to kill us all? no real relevance there so i guess you just hate smokers. I know thats not how you meant it but was the smoker supposed to represent how poorly we treat ourselves or live? as an alcoholic and smoker i'm slightly offendedd.